Proven Resume Examples: Before & After

Each resume is crafted to reflect your unique career achievements, goals, and target roles. No templates, just results that get interviews.

Technology Executive Example

See this example that changes between before and after.

  • Before: Hard to read with a cluttered format.
  • After: Clean, optimized layout with recruiter-friendly content placement.
Resume Examples - 1 Technology Executive BEFORE and AFTER - #profilesthatpop.com Jared J. Wiese - Resume Writing Services - LinkedIn Profile Writing Service - Career Coaching

VP Product Manager Example

Before: Overloaded and confusing.

Resume Examples 2 VP Product Manager BEFORE profilesthatpop.com Jared J. Wiese Resume Writing Services LinkedIn Profile Writing Service Career Coaching

VP Product Manager Example

After: Streamlined, engaging, and highlights key achievements from the start.

Now it sells the client on the first 1/2 page. Then it makes you want to keep reading with a clean simple structure…

Resume Examples 2 VP Product Manager AFTER profilesthatpop.com Jared J. Wiese Resume Writing Services LinkedIn Profile Writing Service Career Coaching

VP Sales Executive Example

Before: Buried impact, unclear structure…

Resume Examples 3 VP Sales Executive BEFORE profilesthatpop.com Jared J. Wiese Resume Writing Services LinkedIn Profile Writing Service Career Coaching

VP Sales Executive Example

After: Eye-catching, professional, and focused on results.

Resume Examples 3 VP Sales Executive AFTER profilesthatpop.com Jared J. Wiese Resume Writing Services LinkedIn Profile Writing Service Career Coaching

VP Supply Chain Example

Before: Disorganized with responsibilities overshadowing achievements.

Resume Examples 4 VP Supply Chain BEFORE profilesthatpop.com Jared J. Wiese Resume Writing Services LinkedIn Profile Writing Service Career Coaching

VP Supply Chain Example

After: Focused on leadership and operational improvements, emphasizing cost savings, efficiency gains, and impactful supply chain solutions. The new format clearly showcases quantifiable results and key contributions to business growth, making it recruiter-friendly and aligned with executive-level expectations.

This format highlights the improved clarity and impact in the after version, positioning the client for success in high-level supply chain roles.

Resume Examples 4 VP Supply Chain AFTER profilesthatpop.com Jared J. Wiese Resume Writing Services LinkedIn Profile Writing Service Career Coaching

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